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Citace: IKolincak 07.01.2010, 09:21:50
Myslíš, jako přímé působení Shan-wei a jejích přisluhovačů? Stavme hranice, a palme kacíře!!! atd.?
Ano, zhruba něco takového...
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Aha, i tak si myslím, že církev brzy vyhlásí křížové tažení, a pak to začne být teprve sranda! A pokud se podaří vybavit chariské námořnictvo granáty a zezadu nabíjenými děly, pak je mi církve snad až líto. Další loďstvo půjde na dno mořské.
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Citace: IKolincak 07.01.2010, 10:22:04
(...) církev brzy vyhlásí křížové tažení, a pak to začne být teprve sranda! A pokud se podaří vybavit chariské námořnictvo granáty a zezadu nabíjenými děly, pak je mi církve snad až líto. Další loďstvo půjde na dno mořské.
Svatá válka je vskutku na spadnutí. Tady asi taky dost záleží na tom, jak moc zdrží Clyntahna vypořádávání se s Kruhem, ale nečekám, že by mu to trvalo nějak extra dlouho, když asi většina odpůrců odtáhne do Charisu.
Explozivní střelivo je teď asi to jediné, co může Charis zachránit proti Flotile, které výstavbu je Církev schopná dotovat (to "F" tam je schválně
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Myslíš jako parafráze na Armadu? A u Erica pořád nic!
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Ne, myslím tím, že ta flotila bude nejspíš dost velká
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S tím Ericem: došlo mi, že měl nedávno nějaké zdravotní problémy. Prý docela vážné. Tak je možné, že tohle je nepřímý důsledek.
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08.01.2010, 08:53:24 »
Chudák, doufám, že se z toho vylíže. A velká asi opravdu bude. Docela by mě pobavilo, kdyby jí říkali taky Neporazitelná.
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Eric uveřejnil první snippet z A Mighty Fortress. Tady ho máte.
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A Mighty Fortress - Snippet 01
September, Year of God 893
I
Lizardherd Square,
City of Manchyr,
Princedom of Corisande
“So I donât know about you people, but Iâve had more than enough of this dragon shit!” Paitryk Hainree shouted from his improvised speakerâs perch on the municipal fire brigade cistern.
“Bastards!” a voice came back out of the small crowd gathered outside the tavern. It was early in the morning, on a Wednesday, and like every other tavern on the face of Safehold, all the taverns of the city of Manchyr were closed and would stay that way until after morning mass. The sun was barely up, the narrow streets were still caverns of shadow, but the clouds overhead already promised rain by afternoon, and the humidity was high.
As, Hainree noted, were tempers. It wasnât a huge crowd, in fact it was considerably smaller than the one heâd hoped for, and probably at least half the men in it were there more out of curiosity than commitment. But the ones who were committed -
“Fucking murderers!” someone else snarled back.
Hainree nodded vigorously, hard enough to make sure everyone in his angry audience could recognize the gesture. He was a silversmith, by trade, not an actor or an orator, and certainly not a priest! But over the last few five-days heâd had the opportunity to profit by the experience and advice of quite a few men who were trained priests. Heâd learned how voice projection and “spontaneous” body language could support and emphasize a message — especially when that message was backed by genuine, burning outrage.
“Yes!” he shouted back to the last speaker. “Damned right theyâre murderers, unless you want to believe that lying bastard Cayleb!” He flung up his hands in eloquent contempt. “Of course he didnât do it! Why, what possible motive could he have had to order Prince Hektorâs murder?”
A fresh chorus of outrage, this time formed of pure anger rather than anything as artificial as words, answered him, and he smiled savagely.
“Goddamned butchers!” yet another voice shouted. “Priest-killers! Heretics! Remember Ferayd!”
“Yes!” He nodded his head again, just as vigorously as before. “They can say what they want — this new ‘archbishopâ of ours and his bishops — but Iâm not so sure you arenât right about Caylebâs precious ‘Church of Charisâ! Maybe there are some priests whoâve abused their offices. No one wants to believe that — I donât want to, do you? But remember what Archbishop Wyllym said in his report about the Ferayd Massacre! Thereâs no doubt Cayleb lied about how terrible the original attack was, and itâs for damned sure he and all his other bootlickers have been lying about how ‘restrainedâ their response to it was. But even so, Mother Church herself acknowledged that the priests who were hanged — hanged impiously, with no proper Church trial, by ‘Archbishop Maikelâsâ own brother, mind you! — were guilty of wrongdoing. Mother Church said that, and the Grand Vicar imposed a personal penance on the Grand Inquisitor himself for letting it happen! Does that sound to you like Mother Church canât be trusted? Like we canât rely on her to deal with abuses and corruption? Like the only answer is to defy Godâs own Church? Cast down the vicarate Langhorne himself ordained?”
There was another snarl of fury, yet this one, Hainree noted, was less fiery than the one before. He was a bit disappointed by that, but not really surprised. Corisandians, by and large, had never felt directly threatened by the policies of the Church of God Awaiting and the Lords of the Temple Lands. Certainly not the way Charisians had felt when they discovered their entire kingdom had been condemned to fire and the sword by that same Church. Or, at least, by the men who controlled it.
Still, it would have been inaccurate — and foolish — to pretend there werenât plenty of Corisandians who had their own reservations about the Churchâs current rulership. Manchyr was a long way from the Temple or the city of Zion, after all, and Corisandians as a whole were undoubtedly more independent-minded in matters of religion than the Inquisition or the vicarate at large would truly have approved. For that matter, plenty of Corisandians had had sons or brothers or fathers killed in the Battle of Darcos Sound, and it was common knowledge that Darcos Sound had been the disastrous consequence of a war which had seen Corisande and its allies conscripted to act as the Churchâs proxies. Among those for whom religious fervor and orthodoxy were major motivators, they burned with a blinding, white-hot passion that surpassed all others. The majority of Corisandians, however, were far less passionate about those particular concerns. Their opposition to the Church of Charis stemmed far more from the fact that it was the Church of Charis, linked in their own minds with the House of Ahrmahkâs conquest of their princedom, than from any outraged sense of orthodoxy. For that matter, Corisande undoubtedly harbored its own share of the reform-minded, and they might well find themselves actively attracted to the breakaway church.
Best not to dwell too heavily on the heresy, Paitryk, Hainree told himself. Leave the ones already on fire over that to burn for themselves. Father Aidryanâs right about that; theyâll be hot enough without you. Spend your sparks on other tinder.
“Iâve no doubt God and Langhorne — and the Archangel Schueler — will deal with that, in time,” he said out loud. “Thatâs Godâs business, and Mother Churchâs, and Iâll leave it to them! But what happens outside the Church — what happens in Corisande, or here on the streets of Manchyr — thatâs manâs business. Our business! A manâs got to know what it is he stands for, and when he knows, he has to truly stand, not just wave his hands about and wish things were different.”
The last word came out in a semi-falsetto sneer, and he felt the fresh anger frothing up.
“Hektor!” a wiry man with a badly scarred left cheek shouted. Hainree couldnât see him, but he recognized the voice easily enough. He should have, after all. Rahn Aimayl had been one of his senior apprentices before the Charisian invasion ruined Hainreeâs once thriving business, along with so many other of the besieged capitalâs enterprises, and Hainree had been there when a cracked mold and a splash of molten silver produced the scar on Aimaylâs cheek.
“Hektor!” Aimayl repeated now. “Hektor!”
“Hektor, Hektor!” other voices took up the shout, and this time Hainreeâs smile could have been a slash lizardâs.
“Well,” he shouted then, “thereâs a hell of a lot more of us than there are of them, when allâs said! And I donât know about you, but Iâm not ready — yet — to assume that all of our lords and great men and members of Parliament are ready to suck up to Cayleb like this so called Regency Council! Maybe all they really need is a little indication that some of the rest of us arenât ready to do that, either!”
* * * * * * * * * *
“Hek-tor! Hek-tor!”
Sergeant Edvard Waistyn grimaced as the crowd streamed closer and its chant rose in both volume and anger. It was easy enough to make out the words, despite the majestic, measured tolling of the cathedralâs bells coming from so close at hand. Of course, one reason it might have been so easy for him to recognize that chant was that, unfortunately, heâd already heard quite a few other chants, very much like it, over the last few five-days.
And itâs not anything Iâm not going to be hearing a lot more of over the next few five-days, neither, he thought grimly.
The sergeant, one of the scout-snipers assigned to the First Battalion, Third Brigade, Imperial Charisian Marines, lay prone on the roof, gazing up along the narrow street below his perch. The crowd flowing down that street, through the shadows between the buildings, still seemed touched by just a bit of hesitancy. The anger was genuine enough, and he didnât doubt theyâd started out in the full fire of their outrage, but now they could see the cathedralâs dome and steeples rising before them. The notion of . . . registering their unhappiness was no longer focused on some future event. It was almost here now, and that could have unpleasant consequences for some of them.
Still and all, Iâm not thinking this is one asâll just blow over with only a little wind. Thereâs rain in this one — and some thunder, too, like as not.
His intent eyes swept slowly, steadily across the men and boys shaking their fists and hurling imprecations in the direction of the rifle-armed men formed up in front of Manchyr Cathedral in the traditional dark blue tunics and light blue trousers of the Charisian Marines. Those Marines formed a watchful line, a barrier between the shouters and another crowd — this one much quieter, moving quickly — as it flowed up the steps behind them.
So far, none of the sporadic “spontaneous demonstrations” had intruded upon the cathedral or its grounds. Waistyn was actually surprised it hadnât happened already, given the ready-made rallying point the “heretical” Church of Charis offered the people out to organize resistance to the Charisian occupation. Maybe thereâd been even more religious discontent in Corisande than the sergeant would have thought before the invasion? And maybe it was just that even the most belligerent rioter hesitated to trespass on the sanctity of Mother Church.
And maybe this crowdâs feeling a little more adventurous than the last few have, he thought grimly.
“Traitors!” The shout managed to cut through the rhythmic chant of the assassinated Corisandian princeâs name. “Murderers! Assassins!”
“Get out! Get the hell out — and take your murdering bastard of an ‘emperorâ with you!”
“Hek-tor! Hek-tor!”
The volume increased still further, difficult as that was to achieve, and the crowd began to flow forward once again, with more assurance, as if its own bellowed imprecations were burning away any last minute hesitation.
I could wish General Gahrvai had his own men down here, Waistyn reflected. If this goes as bad as I think it could . . . .
A group of armsmen in the white and orange colors of the Archbishopâs Guard marched steadily down the street towards the cathedral, and the volume of the shouts ratcheted still higher as those same protesters caught sight of the white cassock and the white-cockaded priestâs cap with its broad orange ribbon at the heart of the guardsmenâs formation.
“Heretic! Traitor!” someone screamed. “Langhorne knows his own — and so does Shan-wei!”
Perfect, Waistyn thought disgustedly. Couldnât've come in the back way, could he now? Donât be daft, Edvard — of course he couldnât! Not today, of all days! He shook his head. Oh, isnât this going to be fun?
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Najednou se tam nevešel, takže tady je pokraočování.
Down at street level, Lieutenant Brahd Tahlas, the youthful commanding officer of Second Platoon, Alpha Company, found himself thinking very much the same thoughts as the veteran sergeant perched above him. In fact, he was thinking them with even more emphasis, given his closer proximity to the steadily swelling mob.
And his greater responsibility for dealing with it.
“I canât say Iâm liking this all that much, Sir,” Platoon Sergeant Zhak Maigee muttered. The platoon sergeant was half again Tahlasâ age, and heâd first enlisted in the Royal Charisian Marines when he was all of fifteen years old. Heâd been a lot of places and seen a lot of things since then — or, as he was occasionally wont to put it, “met a lot of interesting people . . . and killed ‘em!” — and heâd learned his trade thoroughly along the way. That normally made him a reassuring presence, but at the moment his face wore that focused, intent-on-the-business-in-hand expression of an experienced noncom looking at a situation which offered all sorts of possibilities . . . none of them good. Heâd been careful to keep his voice low enough only Tahlas could possibly have heard him, and the lieutenant shrugged.
“I donât much care for it myself,” he admitted in the same, quiet voice, more than a little surprised by how steady heâd managed to keep it. “If you have any suggestions about how to magically convince all these idiots to just disappear, Iâm certainly open to them, Sergeant.”
Despite the situation, Maigee snorted. He rather liked his young lieutenant, and whatever else, the boy had steady nerves. Which probably had something to do with why heâd been selected by Major Portyr, Alpha Companyâs CO, for his current assignment.
And Maigeeâs of course.
“Now, somehow, Sir, I canât seem to come up with a way to do that just this very minute. Let me ponder on it, and Iâll get back to you.”
“Good. In the meantime, though, keep your eye on that group over there, by the lamp post.” Tahlas flicked one hand in an unobtrusive gesture, indicating the small knot of men he had in mind. “Iâve been watching them. Most of these idiots look like the sort of idlers and riffraff who could have just sort of turned up, but not those fellows.”
Maigee considered the cluster of Corisandians Tahlas had singled out and decided the lieutenant had a point. Those men werenât in the crowdâs front ranks, but they werenât at the rear, either, and they seemed oddly . . . cohesive. As if they were their own little group, not really part of the main crowd. Yet they were watching the men about them intensely, with a sort of focus that was different from anyone elseâs, and some of those other men were watching them right back. Almost as if they were . . . waiting for something. Or anticipating it, maybe.
* * * * * * * * * *
The cluster of Church armsmen was closer, now, Waistyn observed, and the quantity of abuse coming from the crowd swelled steadily. It couldnât get a whole lot louder, but it was getting more . . . inclusive as shouts and curses with a clear, definitely religious content added themselves to the ongoing chant of Prince Hektorâs name.
“All right, lads,” the sergeant said calmly to the rest of the squad of scout-snipers on the roof with him. “Check your priming, but no one so much as moves an eyelash without I give the order!”
A quiet chorus of acknowledgment came back to him, and he grunted in approval, but he never took his eyes from the street below him. Despite his injunction, he wasnât concerned by any itchy trigger fingers, really. All of his Marines were veterans, and all of them had been there when Major Portyr made his instructions perfectly — one might almost have said painfully — clear. The last thing anyone wanted was for Charisian Marines to open fire on an “unarmed crowd” of civilians in the streets of Corisandeâs capital. Well, maybe that was the next to last thing, actually. Waistyn was pretty sure that letting anything unfortunate happen to Archbishop Klairmant would be even less desirable. That, after all, was what Waistynâs squad had been put up here to prevent.
Of course, unless weâre ready to start shooting anyone as soon as they get in range of him, itâs possible we might just be a tad late when it comes to the “preventing” part, he thought with profound disgust.
* * * * * * * * * *
“Blasphemers!” Charlz Dobyns shouted, waving his fist at the oncoming Archbishopâs Guard. His voice cracked — it still had an irritating tendency to do that at stressful moments — and his eyes glittered with excitement.
Truth to tell, Charlz didnât really feel all that strongly one way or the other about this “Church of Charis” nonsense. In fact, he hadnât chosen his own war cry — that had been suggested by his older brotherâs friend, Rahn Aimayl. And he wasnât the only person using it, either. At least a dozen others in the crowd, most of them no older than Charlz himself, had begun shouting the same word, just as theyâd rehearsed, the moment someone caught sight of Archbishop Klairmantâs approach.
From the way some of the people around them were reacting, Rahn had been right on the mark when he explained how effective the charge of blasphemy would be.
Personally, Charlz wasnât even entirely certain exactly what “blasphemy” was — except for the way his mother had always clouted him over the ear for it whenever he took Langhorneâs name in vain. And he had no idea how the Church of Charisâ doctrine might be at odds with that of the rest of the Church. He was no priest, that was for sure, and he knew it! But even he found it difficult to believe the more spectacular stories about orgies on altars and child sacrifice. Stood to reason that nobody could get away with that right here in the Cathedral without everyone knowing it was happening, and heâd yet to meet anyone whoâd actually seen it. Or anyone he would have trusted to tell him whether or not it was raining, at any rate!
As far as the rest of it went, though, for all he knew this new ‘churchâ of theirs could have a point. If even a quarter of what some folks were saying about the so-called “Group of Four” was true, he supposed he could understand why some people could be upset with them. But that didnât matter, either. They were the Vicars, and so far as Charlz could see, what the Vicars said, went. He certainly wasnât going to argue with them! If someone else wanted to, that was their affair, and he knew quite a few Corisandians seemed to agree with the Charisians. In fact, at this particular moment, there were a Shan-wei of a lot more people inside the Cathedral than there were standing outside it shouting at them.
For that matter, Charlzâs own mother was the housekeeper for the rectory at Saint Kathrynâs. He knew where she was this morning, and from what sheâd said in the last few five-days, Father Tymahn seemed to be leaning heavily towards this new Church of Charis, as well.
But that was really beside the point, as far as Charlz was concerned. In most ways, he shared his motherâs immense respect for Father Tymahn, yet in this case, she was missing the true point. No. The true point — or at least the one which had brought Charlz here this morning — wasnât doctrine, or who wore the archbishopâs priestâs cap here in Manchyr. Or it wouldnât have been about who wore the cap . . . except for the fact that the man who did had sworn fealty to the Empire of Charis, as well as the Church of Charis, in order to get it.
It wasnât so much that Charlz was a fanatic Corisandian patriot. There really werenât all that many Corisandian “patriots,” in the sense that someone from the millennium-dead Terran Federation might have understood the term. Loyalties in most Safeholdian realms — there were exceptions, like Charis and the Republic of Siddarmark — tended to be purely local. Loyalties to a specific baron, or earl, or duke, perhaps. Or to a prince, or an individual monarch. But not to the concept of a “nation” in the sense of a genuine, self-aware nationstate. Young Charlz, for example, thought of himself first as a Manchyrian, a resident of the city of that name, and then as (in descending order of importance) a subject of the Duke of Manchyr and as a subject of Prince Hektor, who had happened to be Duke of Manchyr, as well as Prince of Corisande.
Beyond that, Charlz had never really thought all that deeply, before the Charisian invasion, about where his loyalties lay or about relations between Corisande and the Kingdom of Charis. In fact, he still wasnât entirely clear on exactly what had provoked open warfare between Corisande and Charis. On the other hand, he was only sixteen Safeholdian years old (fourteen and a half, in the years of long-dead Terra), and he was accustomed to being less than fully clear on quite a few issues. What he did know was that Corisande had been invaded; that the city in which he lived had been placed under siege; that the Corisandian Army had been soundly defeated; and that Prince Hektor — the one clearly visible (from his perspective, at any rate) symbol of Corisandian unity and identity had been assassinated.
That was enough to upset anyone, wasnât it?
Still, heâd have been inclined to leave well enough alone, keep his own head down, and hope for the best if it had been solely up to him. But it wasnât. There were plenty of other people here in Manchyr who definitely werenât inclined to leave well enough alone, and some of them were getting steadily louder and more vociferous. It seemed pretty obvious to Charlz that sooner or later, if they had their way, people were going to have to choose up sides, and if he had to do that, he knew which side he was going to choose. Whatever had started the quarrel between Corisande and Charis, he didnât need any dirty foreigners poking any sticks into hornets nests here in his hometown.
(And they had to be dirty foreigners, didnât they? After all, all foreigners were, werenât they?)
“Blasphemers!” he shouted again.
“Blasphemers!” he heard someone else shouting. It wasnât one of his friends this time, either. Others were starting to take up the cry, and Charlz grinned as he reached under his tunic and loosened the short, heavy cudgel in his belt.
* * * * * * * * * *
“Thatâs enough!”
Rather to Paitryk Hainreeâs surprise, the voice of the young Charisian officer in front of the Cathedral was actually audible through the crowd noise. It probably helped that he was using a leather speaking trumpet, but more likely, Hainree reflected, it had to do with the fact that heâd been trained to be heard through the thunder of a field of battle.
What surprised him even more was that the front ranks of his crowd — No, mob, not “crowd,” he thought. Letâs use the honest word, Paitryk. — actually seemed to hesitate. His eyes widened slightly as he saw it, then narrowed again as he recognized at least part of the reason. The Charisian had raised his voice to be heard, true, but it wasnât a bellow of answering anger. No, it was a voice of . . . exasperation. And the young manâs body language wasnât especially belligerent, either. In fact, he had one hand on his hip, and it looked as if he were actually tapping his toe on the Cathedralâs steps.
He looks more like an irritated tutor somewhere than an army officer confronting a hostile mob, Hainree realized.
“Itâs Wednesday morning!” the Charisian went on. “You should all be ashamed of yourselves! If youâre not in church yourselves, the least you can do is let other people go to mass in peace!”
“What dâyou know about mass, heretic?!” somebody — he thought it might have been Aimayl — shouted back.
“I know Iâm not going to throw rocks through a cathedralâs windows,” the Charisian shouted back. “I know that much!” He gave a visible shudder. “Langhorne only knows what my mother would do to me if she found out about that!”
More than one person in the crowd surprised Hainree — and probably themselves — by laughing. Others only snarled, and there was at least a spatter of additional shouts and curses as Archbishop Klairmant passed through the cathedral doors behind the Marines.
“Go home!” The Charisianâs raised voice sounded almost friendly, tinged more with resignation than anger. “If you have a point to make, make it someplace else, on a day that doesnât belong to God. I donât want to see anybody hurt on a Wednesday! In fact, my orders are to avoid that if I possibly can. But my orders are also to protect the Cathedral and anyone in it, and if I have to hurt someone outside it to do that, I will.”
His voice was considerably harder now, still that of someone trying to be reasonable, but with an undertone that warned them all there was a limit to his patience.
Hainree glanced around the faces of the four or five men closest to him and saw them looking back at him. One of them raised an eyebrow and twitched his head back the way theyâd come, and Hainree nodded very slightly. He wasnât afraid of going toe-to-toe with the Marines himself, but Father Aidryan had made it clear that it was Hainreeâs job to nurture and direct the anti-Charis resistance. That resistance might well require martyrs in days to come, yet it would need leaders just as badly. Possibly even more badly.
The man whoâd raised the eyebrow nodded back and turned away, forging a path towards the front of the now-stalled crowd. Hainree watched him go for a moment, then he and several of the others began filtering towards the back.
* * * * * * * * * *
Damn me if I donât think the ladâs going to do it! Platoon Sergeant Maigee thought wonderingly.
The sergeant wouldnât have bet a single Harchong mark on Lieutenant Tahlasâ being able to talk the mob into turning around and going home, but Tahlas had obviously hit a nerve by reminding them all it was Wednesday. Maigee had expected that to backfire, given the shouts of “blasphemer” and “heretic” coming out of the crowd, yet it would appear the lieutenant had read its mood better than he had.
“Go on, now,” Tahlas said, his tone gentler as the mobâs volume began to decrease and he could lower his own voice level a bit. “Disperse, before anyone gets hurt. I donât want that. For that matter, whether you believe it or not, Emperor Cayleb doesnât want that; Archbishop Klairmant doesnât want that; and itâs for damned sure — if youâll pardon my language — that God doesnât want that. So what say you and I make all those people happy?”
* * * * * * * * * *
Charlz Dahbyns grimaced as he felt the mood of the crowd around him shift. Somehow, this wasnât what heâd anticipated. This Charisian officer — Charlz had no idea how to read the manâs rank insignia — was supposed to be furious, screaming at them to disperse. Threatening them, making his contempt for them clear. He certainly wasnât supposed to be just talking to them! And reasoning with them — or pretending he was, at any rate — was just too underhanded and devious to be believed.
And yet, Charlz wasnât completely immune to the Charisianâs manner. And the other man had a point about its being Wednesday. Not only that, but the Charisianâs mention of his mother had reminded Charlz forcibly of his own mother . . . and how she was likely to react when she found out what her darling boy had been up to when he was supposed to be at mass himself.
He didnât know what thoughts were going through the minds of the rest of the crowd, but he could sense the way the entire mob was settling back on its heels, losing the forward momentum which had carried it down the street. Some of the people in it — including some of Charlzâs friends — were still shouting, yet their voices had lost much of their fervor. They sounded shriller, more isolated, as if those voicesâ owners felt their own certainty oozing away.
Charlz took his hand away from the truncheon under his tunic and was a bit surprised to discover he was actually more relieved than regretful at the way things had so unexpectedly shifted.
He started to turn away, then paused, his eyes widening in shock, as the man whoâd just walked up behind him brought something out from under his own tunic.
Charlz had never seen one of the new “flintlocks” which had been introduced into the Corisandian Army, but he recognized what he had to be seeing now. It was a short, squat weapon — a musket whose stock had been cut down and whose barrel had been sawn down to no more than a couple of feet. It was still far bigger and clumsier than the pistols which equipped the Charisian Imperial Guard, and it must have been extraordinarily difficult to keep it hidden, but the flintlock which had been fitted in place of its original matchlock didnât need the clumsy, smoldering, impossible-to-hide, lit slow match. That had probably helped a lot where concealing it was concerned, a corner of Charlzâs mind thought almost calmly.
He watched, frozen, as the weapon rose. It poked over the shoulder of another young man, no more than a year or so older than Charlz himself, standing beside him. The other young man twitched in astonishment, turning his head, looking across and down at the muzzle as it intruded into the corner of his field of vision . . . just as the man holding it squeezed the trigger.
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A ještě další.
The sudden gunshot took everyone by surprise, even experienced noncoms like Waistyn and Maigee. Perhaps it shouldnât have taken the sergeants unaware, but Tahlasâ obvious success in calming the crowd had lulled even them just a bit, as well.
The man behind that musket had marked the Marine lieutenant as his target. Fortunately for Brahd Tahlas, however, no one would ever have described the would-be murdererâs weapon as a precision instrument. It was a smoothbore, with a very short barrel, and loaded with meal powder, not corned powder. Less than a quarter of the slow-burning, anemic propellant had actually been consumed before the rest was flung out of the barrel in a huge, blinding cloud, and the bulletâs flight could only be characterized as . . . erratic.
The unfortunate young man whoâd been looking at the muzzle at the moment it was fired screamed in agony as his face was savagely burned. He staggered back, clutching at his permanently blinded eyes, and four or five more people whoâd been unlucky enough to be standing directly in front of him cried out in pain of their own as blazing flakes of gunpowder seared “coalminerâs tattoos” into the backs of their necks. One especially luckless soul actually had his hair set on fire and went to his knees, howling in panic and pain as he beat at the flames with both hands.
Charlz Dahbyns was far enough away to escape with only minor singeing, and his head snapped around, looking for the musketâs target.
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“Shit.”
Lieutenant Tahlas wondered if Platoon Sergeant Maigee even realized heâd spoken out loud. The single word was pitched almost conversationally, after all. Not that it was going to make a lot of difference.
The musket ball had almost certainly been meant for him, the lieutenant realized, but it hadnât found him. Instead, it had slammed into the chest of one of his privates, a good four feet to his right. The Marine went down, clutching at the front of his suddenly bloody tunic, and Tahlas realized something else. Major Portyrâs orders had been perfectly explicit on the matter of what Tahlas was supposed to do if firearms or edged weapons were used against any of his troops.
“Fix bayonets!” he heard his own voice command, and the men of his platoon obeyed.
He saw many of those in the crowd suddenly trying to back away as steel clicked and the long, shining blades sprouted from the ends of his Marinesâ rifles. Some of them managed it; others found their escape blocked by the mass of bodies behind them, and still others reacted quite differently. Expressions snarled, truncheons and clubs came out from under tunics, and the front of the mob seemed to solidify somehow, drawing together. It seemed clear the people in those front ranks were ready for a fight.
For now, Brahd Tahlas thought grimly. For now, perhaps.
He looked at his bleeding private, and his jaw tightened as his expression hardened into something far less youthful than his years. Heâd seen dead men enough at Talbor Pass. He looked away again, meeting Maigeeâs eye, and his youthful voice was a thing of hammered iron.
“Sergeant Maigee, clear the street!” he said.
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Náměstí Lizardherd,
Město Manchyr,
knížectví Corisande
Na náměstí Lizardherd v Machyru v Corisande popohání Paitryk Hainree shromážděný dav k nenávisti vůči Charisu. Dozvídáme se, že Paitryk je cvičený církevními Loyalisty ve způsobech jak správně manipulovat dav. Dav je ovšem menší, než Paitryk doufal a ani reakce lidí nejsou tak úplně k jeho spokojenosti.
Pak jsou rozebrané různé úhly pohledů řadových Corisanďanů na celou věc a na důvody jejich vzteku, popřípadě míry intenzity, s jakou nemají Charis rádi.
Nakonec Paitryk za pomoci svého učedníka v řemesle rozvášní dav a dodává, že alespoň dají vědět zástupné vládě, že jsou tu lidé, kteří s nimi nesouhlasí.
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Edvard Waistyn, průzkumník-ostřelovač z prvního batalionu třetí brigády imperiálního charisijského námořnictva, pozoruje ze své pozice na střeše rozvášněný dav, který postupuje ke katedrále. Dav spílá mariňákům, kterí blokují přístup k jinému davu, který ale proudí do katedrály. Seržant se diví, že zatím nedošlo k potyčce, a že asi vliv Církve ani tady v Corisande nebyl tak velký. Možná ale prý třeba už tento dav bude dobrodružnější, než ty dřívější a k nějaké potyčce dojde. Dav se rozvášní ještě víc, když uvidí přicházet arcibiskupa a uskupení kněžích s jejich ozbrojeným doprovodem (arcibiskupská stráž).
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Dole na ulici se spolu baví poručík Brahd Tahlas a četař (?platoon sergeant) Zhak Maigee. Poručík nakonec ukáže na potenciálně problémovou skupinku corisanďanů.
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S tím, jak se k rozvášněnému davu blíži arcibiskupova stráž a kněží, nadávky začínají nabývat více náboženský charakter a Edvard Waistyn na střeše přikazuje svým podřízeným překontrolovat své zbraně a jednat pouze na jeho přímý rozkaz. Ve vnitřním monologu si říká, že všichni pod jeho velením jsou veteráni a stejně by nikdo bez rozkazu nejednal. Střílet do neozbrojeného davu je předposlední událost, kterou by chtěl připustit, ovšem bezpečí arcibiskupa Klairmanta je důležitější.
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Další rozvášňovač davu, Charlz Dobyns, si sám pro sebe přiznává, že i když obviňuje církev Charisu z rouhačství, tak že nejspíš rouhačská vůbec není, a že všechny historky o obětování dětí a orgiích přímo na oltáři jsou nejspíš smyšlené. Dokonce prý může být na té správnější straně, nicméně matka církev má své vikáře (Go4, Group of Four, Gang of Four, Uskupení Čtyř, Banda Čtyř
) a na tom záleží - co oni řeknou, platí. Ovšem mezi Corisanďany je dost těch, kteří s charisijskou verzí církve souhlasí a uvnitř katedrály jich je dokonce podstatně víc, než řvounů venku.
Charlz si přiznává, že o konfliktu vedoucímu k dobytí Corisande moc neví, ale že vždy bude na straně svého města a lidí v něm, a že žádní cizinci tu nemají co dělat. Je mu 16 let (14,5 pozemských). Pak pokračuje v pokřiku a obviňování z rouhačství.
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Paitryk Hainree je překvapený, když mladý charisijský důstojník za pomoci hlásné trouby zaskočí dav klidným, až učitelsky káravým přístupem. Měli by se prý stydět, že ve středu nejsou na mši v kostele jako ostatní
. Při zmínce, že kdyby jeho matka zjistila, že háže kameny do oken katedrály, tak by ho pěkně srovnala, se někteří v davu dokonce zasmějí. Říká jim ať jdou domů, a že v den náležející Bohu nechce nikoho zranit, a že má rozkazy právě takové, ale že to klidně udělá, protože má chránit katedrálu a lidi v ní.
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Někteří začnou odcházet a celková nálada davu se začíná měnit, když Tahlas přidá dalších pár velmi dobře mířených slov.
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Charlz Dahbyns ja také ovlivněný důstojníkovými slovy a velice překvapený jeho klidným chováním, když přece měl ten charisijský cizák řvát a vyhrožovat a dokonce sundá ruku z obušku, který má schovaný pod blůzou. Ovšem člověk, stojící kousek za ním, vytáhne křesadlovou pušku, položí její hlaveň na rameno před ním stojícího člověka a stiskne spoušť.
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Díky předchozímu zklidnění davu výstřel všechny překvapil. Na mušce byl Brahd Tahlas, ale naštěstí ona křesadlovka není nejpřesnější - bez drážkování a se zkrácenou hlavní, nabitá pouze drceným prachem. Nejvíce to odnesl onen překvapený člověk, co posloužil jako opěra zbraně a s ním čtyři nebo pět dalších lidí, stojících před ním, jak je ošlehly hořící zbytky prachu. Charlz Dahbyns byl naštěstí dál a prudce se otočil, jak hledal cíl výstřelu.
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Střela skolila vojína asi 4 stopy daleko od Tahlase, který pozoruje onoho nešťastníka jít k zemi. Ví přesně jaké rozkazy jsou právě pro případ, že dav použije proti jeho vojákům ostré nebo střelné zbraně. Automaticky rozkáže připevnit bajonety. Část davu uteče, část se o to snaží, ale přední řady vypadají připravené na boj a s vytaženými obušky a kyji. Tahlas si ponuře pomyslí, že sice připraveni jsou, ale to jen prozatím. Pak rozkáže vyčistit ulici.
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Dobrý Muphride. Opravdu dobrý. Máš talent podat ve zkratce vše důležité. Tleskám.
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Díky, i když některé části jsou dost kostrbaté - to ta zatracená kocovina... no nic...
V pondělí se ovšem nejspíš dalšího snippetu nedočkáme, protože už tenhle první, značně delší než obvykle, zveřejnil opět sám David. Což znamená, že Ericův snippetovací systém ještě nebyl nastavený na sáčkování podle standardního rozvrhu.
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Inu co se dá dělat, berme to, jak to přichází, a buďme vděčni i za dropky. Stejně se mi to ale hodně líbí.
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Tak zatím máme kliku. Eric (nebo David) uveřejnil další snippet.
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Citace: IKolincak 11.01.2010, 06:04:30
Tak zatím máme kliku. Eric (nebo David) uveřejnil další snippet.
To už vypadá, že by to s nimi i nadále mohlo jít hladce. Juchůůůů
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